17 October 2026 · 9 min read
A dissertation proposal is a contract: you are telling your department what question you will answer, why it matters, and exactly how you will answer it - and they are deciding whether to let you spend a year on it. Students usually meet the proposal format for the first time at the point they must produce one, which is why a concrete annotated example is more useful than a list of headings. Below is a realistic (shortened) example for a Master's-level business dissertation, with notes on what each part is doing.
Working title: "The effect of flexible working policies on employee retention in UK mid-size technology firms". Field: business and management. Length of the full proposal: around 2,000-2,500 words plus references - typical for a Master's dissertation; PhD proposals run longer and demand more theoretical depth.
Example text: "Employee retention has become a board-level concern in UK technology firms since 2021, with sector turnover reported well above the national average. At the same time, flexible working has shifted from perk to expectation. This dissertation asks: to what extent do flexible working policies influence retention of professional staff in mid-size UK technology firms?"
Annotation: notice what the opening does. It gives context in two sentences, then lands on one specific, researchable question with a population (professional staff), a setting (mid-size UK tech firms) and a measurable relationship (flexible working and retention). The most common reason proposals are sent back is a question that is a theme rather than a question - "this dissertation will explore employee retention" - with nothing to test or answer.
Example text: "Existing work divides into three strands. The first treats flexibility as a hygiene factor... The second, grounded in job demands-resources theory, frames flexibility as a resource that buffers turnover intention... The third questions whether observed retention effects are causal, pointing to selection effects in firms that offer flexibility... What none of these strands addresses is the mid-size firm, where policy exists without the HR infrastructure of large corporates."
Annotation: this is doing three jobs at once - showing the student has read the field, organising it into a structure, and arriving at the gap the dissertation fills. Your review section must end at the gap. If a marker cannot tell from your proposal what is missing in the current literature, the proposal is not finished.
Example text: "A mixed-methods design is proposed. Phase one: a survey of employees (target n = 150) across six mid-size technology firms recruited through industry networks, measuring flexibility uptake, job satisfaction and turnover intention using established scales. Phase two: semi-structured interviews with 12-15 HR managers and team leads to explore how policies are implemented in practice. Survey data will be analysed using regression; interviews thematically. Ethical approval will be sought before any contact with participants; all data will be anonymised and stored per university policy."
Annotation: the methodology answers four questions: what data, from whom, collected how, analysed how. It also names limitations honestly (a convenience sample is not representative) and covers ethics in concrete terms. Vague methodology - "data will be collected and analysed using appropriate methods" - is the second most common reason for a revise-and-resubmit.
Example: a simple table mapping months 1-2 to literature and instrument design, months 3-4 to data collection, month 5 to analysis, months 6-7 to writing up, with two supervisor checkpoints named. Annotation: the timeline is not decoration. It proves the project is feasible in the window you have, and examiners read it as evidence of realism. Build in slack - data collection always runs late.
The example proposal closes with 18-25 references in the department's required style (Harvard here), all genuinely cited in the text, weighted towards peer-reviewed sources from the last decade with a few seminal older works. Annotation: padding the list with sources you have not read is obvious to anyone who knows the field, and citing sources you could not have accessed undermines trust in the whole proposal.
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